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ήoOήY · #1 01-10-2008, 09:59 PM

Hii ...

Here's a poem written by me ...

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-- I Miss U --

I miss u babe … yes I do

There's no patience left … I really need u
i love u babe with all my heart
I just wish u feel the part
That I can't wait anymore
For u & me meeting on the shore

I love u hunnie … Yes I do
What if I neva meet u again
And neva feel your sweet embrace
I really love u hunnie … I really need u back hunnie
I just wish u would feel that I'm flouting
If you are not here with me sensing
The feeling of LOVE

Since the day I first met u
There was nothing 2 be scared of
Since the day i left u
It was so tough
That tears cannot stop running down ma cheeks
I couldn't stop imagining ur soul peeks
At me
When I was sitting alone watching the water leak

I miss u babe … yes I do
There's no patience left … I really need u
i love u babe with all my heart
I just wish u feel the part
That I can't wait anymore
For u & me meeting on the shore

I can't wait till the day comes
It's just a matter of time
And if time was in our hands
There would be no doubts
That we would be spaced out again
And there would b no more tears
Running down like rain
Constantly living with fears
If that day never comes !

I miss u babe … yes I do
There's no patience left … I really need u
i love u babe with all my heart
I jus wish u feel the part
That I can't wait anymore
For u & me meeting on the shore

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What do U think of it .?

Don't forget ... i need ur opinions and ur replies ...

cYa ... __DEFINE_LIKE_SHARE__

مزيون بوظبي · 01-11-2008, 01:24 AM

Creative

My sister kindly on the subject

Await news in the English Language Department __DEFINE_LIKE_SHARE__

زهور 2007 · 01-11-2008, 02:44 AM

beautiful

thanxs for this topic

waiting for new __DEFINE_LIKE_SHARE__

قطوة بوظبي · 01-11-2008, 11:22 AM

السلام عليكم

يـسـلـمـووو عـلـى الموضوع

وأتـريـا كـل الـيـديـد والـممـيز

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قلبي رهيف · 01-23-2008, 12:38 PM

نااايس ثاااانكس ^^ __DEFINE_LIKE_SHARE__

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