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Bicycles and cars are important vehicles. They both have advantages and disadvantages.Cars are fast and safe while bicycles are convenient to park.People choose differert vehicles according to the places they live and their different life styles.For example* Americans prefer cars to bikes. They enjoy a high standard of living and can afford to buy cars. At the same time* the highly developed road system makes it possible for them to move from place to place at a fantastic speed.Besides* people can save much time by using cars as well. But bikes are the best choice for us Chinese. Bikes do not consume fuel or gas*so they are environmentally friendly.In addition*we can stay in good shape by riding bikes regularly.Taking everything into consideration*I think* if we do not go to a distant place* bike is a better choice. Everyone should make a contribution to our environment so that the world will be a better place for us to live.Teacher's remarks:The writer presents her ideas in an organized way* which makes it easier for readers to follow and makes her argument more forceful.The precise choice of word is another factor which makes the essay stand out.What's more* she uses conjunctionsproperly* thus making the passage flow naturally and coherently.In a word* the article is well written and the writer has a good sense of English language.I sincerely hope her writing skill develops as time goes on.wow power levelingwow power levelingwow power levelingwow power levelingwow power leveling