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مزيون بوظبي 01-04-2008 03:11 AM

ღ.•° Shiny Star in ... My Hand°•.ღ.•°
 
Hi guys .... friend ...

well ... well ... here I'm with another topic .. "poem "
cuz .. I've posted poem since while ...

this poem is lil bit different actually .. from my
whole my last topic or peoms .. I've written this
poem before long time .. even I showed part
of it to one friend .. and took one sentence & put
it as MSN's nickname ... looooool ... anyway ..

Love has many ways ... and for many things .... ppl
I've tryed to imagine love on my crazy way ... and
this what I've written ... hope u'll like it & enjoy ur time
readin it ...

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wait ... yo ... download this song plz ..before u read
anything ... u'll loose ur half life if u didn't .. << good 4 commercial ... looooool
anyway ... here is tha link ..

Caravan-

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ღ.•° Shiny Star in ... My Hand°•.ღ.•°




In tha middle of traffic world
there's still many mins sure
when u sit thinkin alone
tryin to forget any moan
at night .. by outside's door
u play on Caravan song more
.... and more .. quet air ..
smilin on rocking chair
eyes stare up...with none stop
at one place ... with smily face

there is a quet part
coloured blue & white
clouds .. moon & many stars
back u to life as heal & scar
suddenly ur eyes stare
, look closely and care
about one star .. just one
it fills ur life .. u've none
of reasons , none of explination
it's getting without accpection
getting into ur heart
fills that empty part
shines ur way .. along tha day

" My shiny star .... I'm talkin about u " ..


once u've droped on my hand
while I was lost boy on tha land
I was lucked out boy in prison
searchin for key that was hidden
in this selfish world
in life which been sold
for dirty .. cheap money
but this star teach AloNi
to leave this dirt behind
and enjoy star that he found



there r uncounted words fit
but none of em' will reflict
my star .. what a prety star
near & close to me but still far
how can I reach high upon tha sky
I don't have wings & I can't fly
all I can do is to rest my lil soul
let my soul fly & so u can fill this hole


" shiny star wanna leave it's sky "

here & close .. but gone
now I have just none
u wanna leave me
apart that we'll be
Aloni is lost without u
that's 99% damn true
all I have just time
I'll keep tryin to climb
to tha top even if I'll fall
cuz u'll stay in my soul

although u've left me
even if my eye will see
pains everyday ..
cuz u someway
got in my heart
we became one part
I know that
there is fact
called goodbye
that's not lie
but also sure there
memories we shared
memories never die
even if we say bye

so I'll say
....we may
will be apart...
but u know that
there r memories
filled of glowries
combined u & I
till we die ...


" Nomatter what ... my shiny star .. I won't forget about u "


oneday when I'll look at sky
staring with open eyes
I'll remeber that
truth & fact.. that
my body had shiny star
inside of me ..and scar
one boy who was alone
from his sorrow & maon
and let him to shine like sun
smily face like child's havin fun
glowing like moon
till I'll die .... soon

------------
" Caravan " ... is song .. that I love so much

that's it ... " tha end " ...
it was trip in fantacy ... trip with shiny star ..
hope u liked it ...
ur bro .. friend ..Mazyo0n_AD

زهور 2007 01-07-2008 05:06 PM

fantastic.....so beautiful poem.....i really like....and you wrote by urself...as a start its gooooooood....
^^

and i am waiting for your new poems

God Bless


:p

لأنيـ انسانهـ 01-07-2008 11:24 PM

Hi

Thanx MzYoOoN 4 ThE NiCe pOeM


.. ur SiS ..

.:. EnSaNoOoH .:.

ήoOήY 01-09-2008 04:46 PM

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HaPpY BiRtHdAy To Me :p


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مرحبااااااااا


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