Hii ...
Here's a poem written by me ...
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-- I Miss U --
I miss u babe … yes I do
There's no patience left … I really need u
i love u babe with all my heart
I just wish u feel the part
That I can't wait anymore
For u & me meeting on the shore
I love u hunnie … Yes I do
What if I neva meet u again
And neva feel your sweet embrace
I really love u hunnie … I really need u back hunnie
I just wish u would feel that I'm flouting
If you are not here with me sensing
The feeling of LOVE
Since the day I first met u
There was nothing 2 be scared of
Since the day i left u
It was so tough
That tears cannot stop running down ma cheeks
I couldn't stop imagining ur soul peeks
At me
When I was sitting alone watching the water leak
I miss u babe … yes I do
There's no patience left … I really need u
i love u babe with all my heart
I just wish u feel the part
That I can't wait anymore
For u & me meeting on the shore
I can't wait till the day comes
It's just a matter of time
And if time was in our hands
There would be no doubts
That we would be spaced out again
And there would b no more tears
Running down like rain
Constantly living with fears
If that day never comes !
I miss u babe … yes I do
There's no patience left … I really need u
i love u babe with all my heart
I jus wish u feel the part
That I can't wait anymore
For u & me meeting on the shore
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What do U think of it .?
Don't forget ... i need ur opinions and ur replies ...
cYa ...